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The Seventh Cup
Nitesh Kumar Jain
The storyline kept me puzzled in and out of Avinash and his writings. Apparently the plot developed slowly. Things that are developed slowly with patience result into a nice lovely thing or gets completely messed. Here, story was slow, and yes it was nice and did not turn into a nightmare! The plots have been detailed beyond requirement i felt! If the detailing can be removed then the story was good.
The characters kept engaged. Avinash meeting the Swiss then the story goes around swizerland and there on so forth!
Author’s writing skills are very good. His imagination is great! There were some scenes that lifted their par just because of author’s imagination and his vocabulary. Nice book, its just that its too lengthy!
Yes and of course, don’t forget the climax, I liked it too!
Title : Superwomen
Author : Prachi Garg
Book Length : 168 Pages
Rating : 4/5
Prachi Garg has presented 20 successful women and their lives. The ups and downs until they created their mark. Each woman’s was narrated in short lines. Using simple words and short sentences gave an add-on to it. I felt at times that some incidences could have been ellaborated such as when she meant that the woman missed family supportive! I think that will guide many women to rise for good. Sometimes it did sound monotonus and was very predictable. She is good at her vocabulary. Though each individuals struggle was somewhat similar in terms of the challenges faced yet there was no repetition. Jotting down some many struggles on paper is not easy but her work justifies her efforts..
Their work need to be spread to everyone. She has kept the incidences short and sweet yet justified the soul purpose of the story. Good going Prachi ji…Long way to go…! Heartily congratulations for your work…god bless u